REVIEW ĐỀ WRITING - CHỦ ĐỀ: EDUCATION
🍓 Topic:
" In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most students should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering second education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? "
🍓 Response:
While access to education should be universal and affordable, the reality is that it is often our of reach for many. High unemployment in some countries or regions may even make some feel that it is a waste of time. While situations and circumstances maay vary, in general we should do our part to make sure that as many people finsh high school and university as possible.
First, we will consider the realities and effects of two levels of education. With limited education, one can perhaps find odd jobs at an earlier age, but his or her long-term income and opportunities will be limited. Compare that with someone who completes school. While graduates may have trouble finding work at first, once they do, they have a better chance of keeping their jobs and earning more in the future and thus have a better quality of life.
Secondly, educated people do a lot to create jobs. Mót entrepreneurs and businessmen themselves, people who create employment, received education. These are the people who create growth and opportunity in a society; conversely, those without education can only struggle to look after themselves.
Some would say that by not investing in secondary education when the outlook is bad, governments can save money. This may be true in the short term but it leaves the long-term problem of an undereducated and underdeveloped society. Surely, this is not a responsible solution.
In the final analysis, it often takes short-term scarifice and investment to achieve long-term prosperity. The government must not take shortcuts when it comes to ensuring everyone receives a proper secondary education. This is the surest way to create a better future for everyone.
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🍓 Ghi nhớ và sử dụng:
👑 Từ quan trọng:- universal = (adj) phổ quát
- afforsable = (adj) có thể chi trả
- odd = (adj) lặt vặt
- struggle = (v) vật lộn
- analysis = (n) sự phân tích
- sacrifice = (n) sự hi sinh
- prosperity = (n) sự phồn vinh
- shortcut = (n) đường tắt
👑 Diễn đạt quan trọng:- out of reach = ngoài tầm với
- a waste of time = một sự lãng phí thời gian
- have trouble (in) doing sth = gặp khó khăn trong việc gì
